Shrouded lies

By BlueInk94, Valley Park, MO

the mist shrouds the truth
the air is thick with bold lies
shrouded in a foggy shade
impenetrable to the human eyes
unseen by any glass
unnotices by all it sorouunds
until its blown away by the wind

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ktbug96 said...
May 13, 2010 at 8:45 pm:

short and sweet. wow (:

BlueInk94 replied...
May 17, 2010 at 8:00 pm :

thank you!

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ShernayB. said...
May 10, 2010 at 11:24 am:

Short.

But with a bigger message.

Its brilliant.

You are an amazing writer.!

BlueInk94 replied...
May 10, 2010 at 3:33 pm :

thank u! that means a lot. i always had trouble with short poem!

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BlueInk94 said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:32 am:

Thank you so much! And yeah i always end up making typos. Arg!

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EleanorRigby said...
May 9, 2010 at 2:45 pm:

The imagery here is really magnificant. You have a few typos, and in some of your other pieces too, but that's not a problem. It's fixable. The idea behind this poem is great, good job

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Miseltoe said...
May 7, 2010 at 5:01 pm:

I like it. Lying is as comfatable as skin nowadays.

BlueInk94 replied...
May 7, 2010 at 6:30 pm :

thanx! Its true...! lying is the new talking