Searching for You

February 1, 2010
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I found the
necklace you gave me.

I found the
old pictures we took.

I found your
smile in my dreams.

Now all i need
to find is your love.

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 6:31 pm

wow i really love this! the shortness of your poem makes every word a prize; it's really valuable.

my favorite line is "i found your smile in my dreams." that made ME smile. your ending is also really good, too.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like! keep up the good writing! (:

PS: 5 stars!!!

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