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Falling

As ashes fall from frigid ice,
As tears fall from happy, hopeful eyes,
As petals fall from new rosebuds,
As raindrops fall from sunny skies,
As flames fall on ocean waves,
As snowflakes fall on desert sand,
As blood falls on healed scars,
As skies fall on barren land,
I fall in love with you.





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***Rain*** said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 4:03 pm
I love it! 5 stars!
 
dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 10:17 am
i like this!! :) i like how you build up a sort of anxiety....you start naming off all these things that happen, then for the big "bang" at the end, you soften it up. very sweet :) i really enjoyed reading it! 5 stars :)
 
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