your love

January 31, 2010
By Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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Your love lingers here waiting for me to cach it
to bad i wont
to bad your love has gone to waist
your love will be burned and the ashes will fall to the ground
watch as you fall to your knees because your love was taken by me unispectidly so lets fall togeather because your love killed me so very slowly im dead because of your love


The author's comments:
to the guy who has stollen my heart without knowing it <3 u m

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on Mar. 24 2010 at 10:05 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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haha pain was just what i wanted him to feel at the momment

ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 9:44 am
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

Yeah, a guy hurt me too, but I don't wish him any pain.

on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:01 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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and also my poems are usually sad and about love, itst hard for me to right a poem when im happy so they all end up sad

on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:00 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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thank you, and the killing thing idrather not he is still a good friend and still has my heart and i dont want it to break cuz he died

on Feb. 16 2010 at 6:52 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

someone should go kill that guy! i totally volunteer! lol it was very emotional and even though it was sad, it was a great poem

on Feb. 15 2010 at 9:15 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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thank you, sometimes its hard to relize reality but to live you have to face it sometime thank you for the comment. its hard for me to shar work because not evan my best friend likes my work she says its to depreasing but thats really the only time i can get in a new peace so in ways i like being sad or mad. but then i dont, but any way thanks for the comment!!!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:45 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

i like it. its deep. its the harsh reality that most people ignore.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:32 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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y'all i know there are mistakes and srry this was my first add so please comment


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