Love, Love, and a Broken Heart

January 30, 2010
By Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
A simple minded person can understand the most complicated things.


You've broken my heart,
Beyond repair,
So now,
I really don't care.

I have loved you,
From the moment you said "hi,"
Just so you know,
You didn't have to lie.

You said you loved me,
But was it true,
Or was it a facade,
To make me love you.

My love for you,
Is as strong as before,
But now,
I just don't care anymore.

My broken heart,
Must never be mended,
For my first love,
Was never to begin with.

The author's comments:
I wrote this over the summer, And I decided to submit it. I know its not one of the greatest I have written, but could you leave a comment or rate on how you feel about this...please

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on May. 20 2011 at 11:47 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

My favorite part is...you said you loved me, but was it true, or was it a facade, to make me love you...I LOVE that part...the rest of the poem is good, but it wasn't one of your best like you said.

on Feb. 12 2010 at 6:01 pm
kaitlyn4 SILVER, Keller, Texas
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=] that was amazing


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