The truth

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The truth is
I need you
The truth is
I love you
The truth is
I don't want to lose you
I cant lose you
I want your love
I crave it
But i cant admit it
Because then everyone would know
My secret.
Shhhhh, they dont know.
Its just my secret.
A terrible secret of my own.





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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 10:22 pm
This was okay...I think if you refrain "the truth is" at the beginning of the poem, you should continue to refrain til the end. unless you could make a powerful transition without losing the meaning.
 
bilbogirl replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 8:35 am
okay, thank you so much for your feedback. Now i know what i need to work on! thanks again :)
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 11:38 am
You're Welcome :)
 
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