Little Timmy

January 29, 2010
By Lost_Cookie GOLD, Surprise, Arizona
Lost_Cookie GOLD, Surprise, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"You are your toughest critic"- Quintin Clark


It's Timmy's birthday and he just turned 8.

So ignorant to the world.

Just eating his cake.


It's Timmy's birthday and he just turned 10.

Starting to grow up.

But he won't be the same again.


It's Timmy's birthday and he just turned 12.

He lost his mom.

So inside himself he delves.


It's Timmy's birthday and he just turned 14.

He smokes drugs for the pain.

But hey its ok he's only a teen.


It's Timmy's birthday and he just turned 16.

No car no job.

He stays locked in his room listening to Queen.


It's Timmy's birthday and he just turned 18.

Now he's a man.

No matter how hard he tries he can't stay clean.


It's Tim's birthday and he just turned 20.

He has no one.

On the inside he's empty.


It's Tim's birthday, he would be 21.

He is dead.

And he ended it all with the bang of a gun.

The author's comments:
Wrote this for creative writing. We had to pick a photo and write something about the scene. The one I chose was of a little kid blowing out candles on a cake.

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