My Love

January 28, 2010
By ♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
" The greatest things in life are unseen, Thats why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

My love,

Love is our connection To you I dedicate all my affection

The moment I saw you my heart was sold I dream that together we will grow old

My love is so strong, it makes me fly I love you immensely, that I cannot deny

All of you is what I need
Together, we will succeed

The author's comments:
This is a poem that i wrote to my girlfriend.

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This article has 5 comments.

RNash SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:28 pm
RNash SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate it is that we are powerful beyond measure it is are light not are darkness that most frightens us..."

nice jon

on May. 11 2010 at 9:33 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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kso this is amazing and one of my favorites! i love this alot! 

dancer4729 said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:19 pm
dancer4729, Fruita, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"For Me it's hard to write about the nice trees and flowers and happy shit. It's a lot easier to write about whats pissing you off." ~Adam Gontier

Oh my god! That is amazing! And SO SWEET that you wrote that for your girlfriend :) Great writing! I love everything I have read of yours its amazing! Read mine if you get a chance, or want to. :) P.S. its totally amazing when a guy can write! Especially when its for his girl

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:15 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

AMAZING!!!! <3

on May. 10 2010 at 7:31 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow!!! You are a great writer!!! I love your work and this is no exception-so sweet!!! How did you first start writing?


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