My Love

January 28, 2010
My love,

Love is our connection To you I dedicate all my affection

The moment I saw you my heart was sold I dream that together we will grow old

My love is so strong, it makes me fly I love you immensely, that I cannot deny

All of you is what I need
Together, we will succeed

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BlueStorm said...
May 12, 2010 at 7:28 pm
nice jon
insaneprincess said...
May 11, 2010 at 9:33 pm
kso this is amazing and one of my favorites! i love this alot! 
dancer4729 said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:19 pm
Oh my god! That is amazing! And SO SWEET that you wrote that for your girlfriend :) Great writing! I love everything I have read of yours its amazing! Read mine if you get a chance, or want to. :) P.S. its totally amazing when a guy can write! Especially when its for his girl
Kairah027 said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:15 pm
AMAZING!!!! <3
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:31 pm
Wow!!! You are a great writer!!! I love your work and this is no exception-so sweet!!! How did you first start writing?
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