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Valley Rain

January 28, 2010
By Seth... BRONZE, Hidden Valley Lake, California
Seth... BRONZE, Hidden Valley Lake, California
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truth is everyones gonna hurt you. you just have to find the ones worth suffering for.


electricty crackles in the air.
moisture collects quikly on every surface.
it is the first time since the fourth moon two suns ago yhat tha valley has seen rain.
New children and elders alike run out of their dwellings to feel the soft carress of rain on their skin.
the people of the valley peel off their head dresses and sandals to silentley give thanks for the rain.

all is well.


The author's comments:
i got this idea from a book of old indian folk stories my g paw got me all those years ago.

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Seth... BRONZE said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 1:06 pm
Seth... BRONZE, Hidden Valley Lake, California
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
truth is everyones gonna hurt you. you just have to find the ones worth suffering for.

yay im liked