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The Rain

The rain,
It falls upon my face
Blending with my tears,

The tears,
That fall,
Are for you,

But you will never care,
You will never glance my way,
And see how much I want,
for your smile to be for me,
Instead of someone else,

The storm it rages on,
And yet I feel no cold,
Nor can I ever really feel the sun,

The numbness,
overtakes me,
Just when I think I'm fine,
And so it will be,
That I am right here,
And as you are passing by,

You will not look into my eyes,
For you know what you will see,
The misery,
That is killing me,
And slowly,
Oh so slowly,

My heart is hardening,
So that one day,
When you do want me,
It is you I will not see.



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Nikki95 said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 12:45 pm:
Omg I love this poem! You really know how to write :)So emotional makes me want to cry :'( lol....I wish I could write like this
 
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 2:07 pm :
Thanks! Its nice that people appreciate my poetry. And you can write.... very well! I love your poem A Chance! (:
 
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MoonlitxRose said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 11:17 am:
Oh my goodness I love this poem! You made so deep and meaningful! I like how it's so relateable for every girl out there who happens to really like this guy and the guy doesn't notice or just doesn't feel the same way. This was well written! I like how you related the rain with tears that cascade down your face and how the rain blends in with your tears! AWESOME job on writing this! :)
 
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 12:12 pm :
Thanks!!! Its so great to know that my poetry is appreciated!!!! (:
 
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melone96 said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 4:15 pm:
LOVE IT!!!
 
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 7:36 pm :
Thank you so much!!!! (:
 
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broadwaylover432 said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 10:51 am:
 this is great! I've definitely been here before.
 
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 7:37 pm :
Thanks!!! And me too. It sucks, but thats how it is! (:
 
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ApolloReign said...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 2:45 pm:
Wow. You were right! I really, really love this. Haha, this is so much better than the junk I write. I really enjoyed it.

You remind me a lot of myself. :P
 
lostnhim replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 2:26 pm :
Thanks! But your stuff is really good too!!!!! I loved it!!!!!(:
 
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Milo! said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 4:10 pm:
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
lostnhim replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 4:59 pm :
Thanks, and i will!
 
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lh42195 said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 8:55 pm:
This was so good. I really understand it and can relate to it. Good job.
 
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:48 pm :
Thank you!
 
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lostnhim said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:18 pm:
Thank you so much Papa! It means so much to me that you enjoy my writing! (And it is SO cool that you made an account just so that you could comment on my poetry! It means a lot to me that you did. I love you !)
 
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Papa said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:01 am:
Dear lostinhim
I almost forgot to read your poem. Too much work and my intention was lost. You are truely gifted. You crawl deep inside yourself and pull out the deep thought and emotion that defines your writing. I remember little flower from long ago. Keep it up little flower, do what you love and love what you do. That is a gift from Him. love Papa
 
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:22 pm :
Oops! I accidently posted my reply to you as a new comment! Sorry, but anyways what it says is: Thank you SO much Papa! It means so much to me that you enjoy my writing! ( And it is SO cool that you made an account just so that you could comment on my poetry! It means a lot to me that you did. I love you!)
 
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Shahed said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 9:25 pm:
you know when i almost got to the end of this i didnt want it to be over.. this is jst amazing! I mean they way everything you said is jst gr8! .. ur work is gr8!
 
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 11:33 pm :
Thank you!It means a lot to me when people tell me that they appreciate my work. And by the way, i really liked your gum analogy in your poem " Your Everything" It is a really great peice.
 
Shahed replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 9:18 am :
You're most welcome!
I really do appreciate your work..
Thank you! .. I believe that what comes out of the heart goes straight to the heart! ;)
 
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