Fade...

January 28, 2010
By Lynne03 SILVER, Greeley, Colorado
Lynne03 SILVER, Greeley, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"When you feel like giving up, remember why you held on for so long in the first place." -Someone


Am I slowly disappearing?
Slowly becoming true oblivion?
Will I fade from all memories?
Or will I just fade into the darkness?


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on Aug. 14 2010 at 5:53 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Short and sweet. I love poems like this. Just be sure you inject enough pure emotion into the words. I think you did a fairly good job of that here, but it lacked a little bit of punch. This is definitely, to me, one of the hardest ways to write a poem, but I think you pulled it off. 

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