January 28, 2010
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Am I slowly disappearing?
Slowly becoming true oblivion?
Will I fade from all memories?
Or will I just fade into the darkness?

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 5:53 pm

Short and sweet. I love poems like this. Just be sure you inject enough pure emotion into the words. I think you did a fairly good job of that here, but it lacked a little bit of punch. This is definitely, to me, one of the hardest ways to write a poem, but I think you pulled it off. 

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