because you wern't at school today

January 28, 2010
i don't know how you are
or what has gone wrong
because you aren't at school my txts havent been answerd all day long
i worry because i love you
i love you and i care
i also miss you to
without you i am bare
i hope your safe at home
and not in any danger
with out you i'm alone
even i feel like a stranger
time goes by extremely slow
when i'm not right by your side
i only wish i could know
because worry makes me cry





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dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 9:55 am
aww it like it :) it's got that romantic touch that i (probably most girls) love ;) very well written! LOVE it :) would you mind checking out some of my work? id love your opinon :) keep writing!!
 
haleynicole(: said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 4:28 pm
i love this(:
 
lafufu said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 3:03 pm
Aww this is cute. The poem is pretty well-written except "i also miss you to" should be "too". I'm OCD like that.
 
hollyhottell replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 3:54 pm
thank you. sorry im a bad speller
 
dip_stick replied...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 6:08 pm
im a bad speller as well haha o_O
 
dip_stick said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 7:09 pm
this happend to me one day, my best friend/on off boyfriend wasnt at school. his mom was very sick at the time and i was so worried about him, at the end of the day his mom called me, he was in the hospital he had cut himself to deap and way to many times. i spent the houl weekend on the hospital bed with him in the end he got out safe but worried us to death. but hey lifes a climb!
 
CaptainFabulous. said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 5:57 pm
i like this
i know when my boyfriend is not at school it feels as if the day drags by
good poem
 
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