Hate into Love

January 28, 2010
By BabyGirlBrittany SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
BabyGirlBrittany SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isnt about finding yourself, Its about creating yourself,"


Pain,
It feels so strong
It’ll take over your day
And seem to stay so long

I wish they understood.
The way I feel inside
There hate is overbearing
I thought deeply and I sighed

The world has become so cruel
And unbelievably filled with hate
I feel different from the rest
Maybe I was meant to do something great

God put me here for a reason
To change the way we feel
To help you see how I see
Because the pain you cause is real

I want this earth to see compassion
And feel overwhelming love
So that we can see the peace
That’s future generations will always speak of


The author's comments:
My poem is here to inspire all of the to change there hate into love. To see they way I see so that one day we may all live in peace with each other.

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Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 3:09 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

I really liked this! It was nicely worded and it naturally flowed into the ending. I'm definately giving this 5 stars.

Paulie_V said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 11:05 am
wow, this really is an inspiration. this poem is really intense...nice job:)


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