Love me

January 28, 2010
its amazing how quickly life ends.
how little time we have,
to love and make friends.

most people don't realize how thin
the line is between life and death
i do

making the best outta life,
that's my goal
takin' it to the edge,
that's where i'm gonna go.

and i need you,
i need you to trust me,
i need you to stand by me,
believe in me.

i want you to love me.

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Collado92 said...
May 14, 2010 at 6:28 pm
i like this poem, I checked out some of your others and you are a good writer.
bebedoll14 said...
May 5, 2010 at 9:54 pm
It was amazing. Great Job and thanks for commenting on mine
invisible13 replied...
May 17, 2010 at 7:15 am
sure. i loved them
babiigurl said...
May 3, 2010 at 1:36 pm
That wuz soooooooooooo gooooood
zombienoodlehead This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 6:37 pm
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii loveee itttt itssss soooo sweeett! great job
cheyfla replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 8:16 am
thanks so much, i mean, i think it's the best outta the ones ive written. will you read my other ones? please?
Andrew:)139864133432 replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 11:21 am
omg that was like totally awesome
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