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Devil find me, look upon my soul and tell me which you cannot;
that its yours.
And angel, you angel, come and see into me and tell why so I am fit to endure that which the devil does embrace.
Answer this, try.
And when its so, take blame;
for it is the immortal fault.
Chide me for the shape of my soul,
but do not condemn me for its existence.




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berkeleybear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 9:53 am:
Great thoughts and ideas, but the rhythm was off
 
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alayapoetgirl said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 7:52 pm:
I don't know what to say. This a great! I can sense in your words that you have a passion for poetry. I too love the message it sent me, and I agree. If you get the chance check out my opinion essay on animal rights/vegetarianism
 
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zombieattack said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:05 pm:
Wow, this is so...amazing. Great work, :)
 
TheIdea replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 2:42 pm :
ha wow thanks :)
 
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DallysGrrl said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 10:37 am:
Sounds very....Shakespeareian. I lik it.
 
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INnaturegirl said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:02 am:
i really love the message in this poem :)
great job... keep writing please
 
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 5:21 pm:
I like this.
Keep writing.
 
KaitbrynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 5:49 pm :
Really nice. You should check out my poem Why I write and, if ever oh ever it gets published, Walls.
 
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