Too Bad

January 28, 2010
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She lived
But wanted to die
No one understood her pain
She always cried
No one ever saw
For she wanted to conceal
All that she thought
All that she feels

People thought she was mean
And she kind of was
Who could blame her
Well many would
Her life wasn't perfect
Wasn't good
It was her fault
She messed up
Drugs can do that
To bad she didn't live long enough

Her high school now has a memorial
Saying how much she'll be missed
When it was the people
Who drove her to death
With all the judging and laughing
Stupid remarks
I feel bad for all those people
Because they all suck
Her death is upon them
I hope they remember her
When it all comes back to them
They'll know exactly how she felt
As she tried to live

To bad she didn't live long enough
To figure out she could make her way back
To the person she was
Before she went down a bad path
It's never easy
But it's sometimes better than death
Well hopefully she has peace
Wherever that is

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ModernMissBennet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 7:00 pm
I like how this is sophisticated and very candid at the same time. Very good!
Powd3er said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 2:58 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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