fighting the tide

January 27, 2010
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have you heard my liquid battle cries
as they flow all around
no one heard their tugging
until they realized; we're going down
nobody felt the undertow
until someone started the flames
now it's too late
we're done for sure

come with us next time
before the end is nigh
sail into battle with us
leave only your children behind
save the world next time
keep saving yourselves from mind
repaint your face with battle lines
they're washed away by time

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Powd3er said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 11:23 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
Amy13 replied...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 6:35 pm
Thanks! and sure I'll look at yours :)
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