Darkness

January 27, 2010
Darkness.
Stinging needles of water
Getting faster, faster.
The sky opens up.
The rain gushes from the sky,
Flooding the dry plants.
Boom!
Silence.
A blinding flash,
bright as the sun.
Darkness,
as black as pitch.
Light!
Flames consume a tree nearby.
Creaking...
Snap!
The tree falls,
Creating an inferno.
Destroying everything in its way.
The flames coming closer...
And closer...
They consumes the world.
Forever.
Darkness.





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LuvDove said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 1:26 pm
hey!!! i felt like all of your new work today and i got to say it's really good!!! lol... see you in music and french tommorow(everones favorite subjects!!!)
 
Nikiblue said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 9:17 am
Great job, very vivid. Nice use of the descriptions. Keep it up (:
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 11:29 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Pensive?Gurl replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 9:51 pm
I LOVERED IT!!!!!! nice work!
 
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