Darkness

January 27, 2010
By ShadowThief13 BRONZE, Colts Neck, New Jersey
ShadowThief13 BRONZE, Colts Neck, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Enjoy life. Think of all the women who passed up dessert on the Titanic.
- Anonymous


Darkness.
Stinging needles of water
Getting faster, faster.
The sky opens up.
The rain gushes from the sky,
Flooding the dry plants.
Boom!
Silence.
A blinding flash,
bright as the sun.
Darkness,
as black as pitch.
Light!
Flames consume a tree nearby.
Creaking...
Snap!
The tree falls,
Creating an inferno.
Destroying everything in its way.
The flames coming closer...
And closer...
They consumes the world.
Forever.
Darkness.


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LuvDove BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 1:26 pm
LuvDove BRONZE, Oceanport, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Even if you are on the right track, you will get run over if you just sit there.

- Will Rogers

hey!!! i felt like all of your new work today and i got to say it's really good!!! lol... see you in music and french tommorow(everones favorite subjects!!!)

on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:17 am
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

Great job, very vivid. Nice use of the descriptions. Keep it up (:

on Mar. 11 2010 at 9:51 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

I LOVERED IT!!!!!! nice work!

on Feb. 9 2010 at 11:29 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
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This poem has great flow and insight.

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