Depression

January 27, 2010
By Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
48 articles 1 photo 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat


Worry fills
Every bone
Every breath
Is harder to take
Knowing it be
Worthless
Depression
Creeping in
Going to have to
Hide again
A worthless life
I must say
Pain filling
It everyday
No escape
The route
Won’t end
I know the
Answer
Before time is up
Leave me
He will
No sorrow within
Life seems worthless
I give you all
You took for granted
Every move is agony
Everything breath is harder
Depression creeping in
Must hide it
From the world again
A ripping sound
We hear it both
My heart
Breaks into two
You were worth it
Pain in every breath
I know the answer
Before time is up
Why did I
Look ahead?
Death is
Creeping in
You were
My everything
Lies were
Said from
You to me
I believe
Them all
I feel it
Depression
Once again
Is setting in


The author's comments:
I wrote this years ago when me and my now ex were falling apart.

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on Jan. 26 2011 at 10:16 am
I've been in the same situation before. I know how you felt.

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:55 pm
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
48 articles 1 photo 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

Of course I will. I appricate the comment and the encouragement. I only ask if you could review some of my other work and more. I don't have enough time to check this website enough and must to it during school. I thank you so very much. =)

on Feb. 8 2010 at 5:24 pm
Anne Powdris SILVER, --, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 36 comments
This is wonderful! Keep writing!

You really put a lot of emotion into it with simple words and short verses :)

Would you mind checking a poem of mine, too? It's called "Life," and I would really like some criticism!


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