January 27, 2010
Worry fills
Every bone
Every breath
Is harder to take
Knowing it be
Creeping in
Going to have to
Hide again
A worthless life
I must say
Pain filling
It everyday
No escape
The route
Won’t end
I know the
Before time is up
Leave me
He will
No sorrow within
Life seems worthless
I give you all
You took for granted
Every move is agony
Everything breath is harder
Depression creeping in
Must hide it
From the world again
A ripping sound
We hear it both
My heart
Breaks into two
You were worth it
Pain in every breath
I know the answer
Before time is up
Why did I
Look ahead?
Death is
Creeping in
You were
My everything
Lies were
Said from
You to me
I believe
Them all
I feel it
Once again
Is setting in

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Navi-Talmid-Shel-Seraphim said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 10:16 am
I've been in the same situation before. I know how you felt.
Anne P. said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 5:24 pm
This is wonderful! Keep writing!
You really put a lot of emotion into it with simple words and short verses :)
Would you mind checking a poem of mine, too? It's called "Life," and I would really like some criticism!
Sorcha_vampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:55 pm
Of course I will. I appricate the comment and the encouragement. I only ask if you could review some of my other work and more. I don't have enough time to check this website enough and must to it during school. I thank you so very much. =)
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