first impressions

January 27, 2010
i thought i loved you
i thought you cared
if i was wrong i'm sorry
but you said you loved me
and always would
you said you would wait
as long as we needed
now i see all you wanted was not me
but my body
so i'm sorry
but i can't accept that
i thought you would be the one who really cared
i guess first impressions can be wrong

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adristar96 said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 8:28 pm
i like it. what you need to work on though is making your words flow. maybe its just me or something but when i read it, the sentences or phrases start abruptly and it ruins the poem. other than that i think its good.
stephers replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 10:12 am
okay...this one is older but yeah i see what you mean
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