SINKING Down...

January 24, 2010
Sinking down so very low
My shadow follows me everywhere i go
To be all alone
And asking for a helping hand
Im reacching out
And im almost gone
But no one understands
That a broken heart
is what drove me in the sand
So as im sinking down
Just wave goodbye
Lifes not fair
So don't bother to cry
You never helped me
You just broke me down
So ill no longer hurt
because of you
Im dead in the dirt
Im through
no pain no sound
Only memmories remain
While im under the ground





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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:38 pm
i luv the emotion u put into it. poetry is definetly ur thing! of course, i haven't ever read any stories from u ;) overall, u being an awesome writer says it all
 
allgood15 replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 10:38 am
Thanks so much your comment means alot. it made my day!!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 3:00 pm
aww no problem. just plz keep writing! ;)
 
allgood15 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 4:50 pm
This poem is for difficult times. I wrote it because I fully understand it.
 
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