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The Sounds of Silence

Floor creaking,
Mice squeaking,
Noises you can hear.
Bats shrieking,
Faucet leaking,
Footfalls coming near.
Branches scratching,
Fear is hatching,
Skin begins to crawl.
Door unlatching,
Breath is catching,
Death isn't far at all.



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clumsy_one123 said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 5:49 pm
UGH it wont let me reply to ur comment so I have to start another one... haha its ok. i think i should add a few lines that go something like this... Glass crashing, Window smashing, My sister is a retard . LOL
 
rebeldiamond1313kd said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 3:59 pm
Cool. When did this one get accepted? I didn't know about it.
Is it the sounds of your old house, or no? (lol. I'm teasing. you would have to mention hearing a girl slamming on the window trying to get the attention of a squirrel too.)
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 8:56 am
you've never seen it cause i've never shown it to you. haha yeah i think i'll add a part that goes something like this: Glass crashing, Window Smashing, My sister is a retard . LOL
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 11:25 am
Wow, what a jerk. I called your house old. :( I like your house.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 5:48 pm
haha its ok. i think i should add a few lines that go something like this... Glass crashing, Window smashing, My sister is a retard . LOL
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 4:50 pm
hahaha that's perfect!!
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 5:40 pm
wow it posted twice... first it wont post at all, then it posts twice. UGH >.<
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 5:06 pm
I hate when that happens. I also dislike the 10 character rule on comments.. why can't I just say "lol" sometimes?? thats why once I put "lolllllllllll", so it would post.
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 5:26 pm
haha i wondered about that :P
 
rebeldiamond1313kd replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 4:23 pm
yeah. i wasn't actually saying "laugh out loud loud loud loud loud..." that would be retarded . I learned that there is also SOL, Sob Out Loud. I heard it in "Gives You Hell " by The All American Rejects. Just thought I'd share. (It took me awhile to figure out what it stood for, lol.. or sol)
 
clumsy_one123 replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 6:04 pm
i dont think i've ever needed to say sol... hmm
 
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