The Snow

January 23, 2010
Snow is like candy to a child
they can't stop eating it
there parents say
don't eat the yellow snow
so they stay away
snow to a dog is like another toy
running through it
and throwing it up in the air with their nose
snow to a teenager is like money
the more there is to shovel
the things that you want come easier
snow to and adult is like
vegetables to a toddler
the words "Oh no not more"
mean to them snow is like acid rain
now for seniors
it might bring back good memories
but it also brings the dangerous ice that is very hard to avoid.

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veggiegirl said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 2:02 pm
Thank you for telling me about the mistake SharpestSatire! Is it possible to change it?
SharpestSatire said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 4:09 pm
So cute! One critique. In the line: 'they can't stop eating it/there parents say', I think you meant 'their'. :)
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