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Febreze is the perfect example of some boys.
It's packaging looks nice,
It's got a fresh smell,
So you buy it,
And use it for a while.

It gets you hooked,
So you decide to spray a f***load.
Turns out once you get a lot out,
You realize a couple of things.
That it's completely fake,
And that it annoys you to s***.

It leaves you wondering,
why you bothered with it in the first place.
So you get rid of the bottle,
But the scent still lingers.
And it taunts you about your past actions.





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Powd3er said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 11:33 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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