Fallen

One talk
one touch
one kiss
one whisper
three littles
and i have fallen
no turning back
everything has changed
i dont know if this is a disaster or not
but i have fallen





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DaniWill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 7:42 pm
short but incredibly powerful :) i've never been in love but i can still feel when i read it
 
always-sunshine replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 12:49 pm
well thanks
 
Natasha_K said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 11:11 am
all i think about is death and voilence, its sad but i love that poem
 
always-sunshine replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 2:16 pm
thanks why is that
 
Natasha_K replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 1:28 pm
its comforting ive been around it so much its pretty much all I think about
 
always-sunshine replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 12:50 pm
oh well that sucks
 
always-sunshine said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 2:10 pm
thanks for taking the time to read it
s.l.e.
 
Shay1 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 9:17 am
sometimes love can be a disaster but we got to move on.... I really like it
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 11:31 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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always_invisible replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 2:11 pm
hey thanks for the comment
i will at ur stuff
thanks again
 
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