What a Surprise

January 25, 2010
By Anonymous

What a surprise
The orthodontist appointment scheduled for November
The tooth paste when he will be cleaning my teeth
The loud, nosy vibration of the machine
The happy feeling when they say that it is a surprise
The hot feeling of the air in the Bahamas’
Of when we get off the boat to walk around
It is as fun as going to North Carolina
I wanted to stay out there for a longer time

The author's comments:
The thing that inspired me to write this poem is because i really didn't know that i was going to go on a cruz!

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