January 12, 2010
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She flies and flits and flutters all day,
Her magnificent colors,
A beautiful array,
She sips the nectar of flowers in a peculiar way,
And enjoys to chase others in blissful play.
Dear and free,
Great and gay,
Why do you always flip-flap away?
Whenever I'm near,
You leap up into the sky.
Your wings are silent without even a sigh.
You appear so small and fragile and mild,
But truly, inside you, you're exciting and wild!
I wish I could meet or become one of you someday,
For it must be great fun to flit-flutter and fly away.

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JettaWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 11:18 am
I love this! It was simple, playful, yet gorgeous in its own unique way... Fantastic. You're a really great poet; please, please continue to write. YOu're truly gifted!! Wow. Your photography is fantastic as well!
JeanGrey said...
May 27, 2010 at 12:01 am
I.Love.It. All your poetry is amzing :)
JeanGrey replied...
May 27, 2010 at 12:02 am
*amazing lol typos suck :)
Sparrow.the.Coyote replied...
May 29, 2010 at 8:07 pm
Thank you so very much :D
#1 Fan said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 10:41 am
Yes, I agree with Teri. There is some fearlessness here. I also think I recognize someone in the description...
Teri said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 11:47 pm
I love the fearlessness with which you approach word usage. Great variety here, and some vivid images.
Mikaela said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 11:10 pm
I love comments - it'd be great to hear what you all think of it!
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