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Temptations

Soft throat,
temptations overcome.
I love you ever so,
but how long must this last?
My longing,
my thirst...
Soon
this must pass.
Come with me,
take my hand,
see what I
am forced to be.
You turn away,
I understand,
then slowly you turn back,
on your knees you beg,
you want to be with me,
just like me,
an immortal soul,
forever a part
of the damned.
Your love is so strong,
you are so willing,
what can I do but agree?
With your soft, soft throat
at my lips,
you utter a quiet moan
as the burning
takes over your body.
Through the minutes I wait,
through the hours I wait
until you awaken
to a beautiful new place
full of amazing sights
you never knew.
Now we look
into each others' eyes
because behind the red tint
of the short-lived bloodlust haze
is the beautiful person
that is mine for eternity...



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thepreechyteenagerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 4:59 pm:

So on your Person Descriptio thing on your profile, you said you got this published in a book.  What is the book called?  Was it like a school-published book or was it by a publishig company?

PS.  Loved this, although yeah as Mikaela said, the whole vampire topic is no eclipsed by twilight.  No pun intended.

 
Waiting_For_Love replied...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 4:51 pm :
yeah, its published teenagers from i think only california or something like that. lol anyways its call a Celebration of Poets and i think its a 2010 version. either that or 2009 :)
 
Waiting_For_Love replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 11:33 am :
and about the vampire topic, i do understand about that and i didn't realize just how popular it was getting until after this was posted. im trying my best to stay off of vampire topics but its hard lol.
 
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Mikaela said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 12:07 am:
It's good, but watch out: vampire stuff has been getting way overdone.
 
Chaotic_Serenity_13 replied...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 10:32 pm :
Yeah, i see what you mena. I wrote it when i was enering for a chool thin,g no biggie but i understnad.
 
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