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The Invite Said “And Guest” MAG

By Anonymous

She caught the attention of the swayers and side-steppers
And briefly the banter of the aristocrats came to a minor pause,
as they rose their champagne glasses in recognition.
Murmurs then became un-muted. Someone commented
on her dress,
“My, what an audacious choice of attire. But, she is young.”
She reluctantly bit her tongue.
And then the volume of idle conversation changed from one to ten,
she was forgotten almost as instantly as she was acknowledged,
and then
she descended the stairs, and the sound of her heels
rapped the marble tiles out of tune to the orchestra
(her entrance had interrupted an intense discussion
of Cristal and caviar).
She relished in that short moment of disturbance …
And so she surveyed this crowd of sophistication,
clad in black and white
(extravagance and refinement were seated here tonight!)
Nothing adorned their faces, but she knew this was a masquerade.
Every gentleman here had his lady on parade.
She weaved her way in and out of tables and chairs,
feigning disinterest in the spinning movements of cavorting couples
but as a man approached his fiancée, and wooed her to dance
she stopped and allowed herself one look. Just one look.
Said an older woman beside her, “Oh, wasn’t he so charismatic?”
She knew his charm was programmatic. His smile automatic.
Nevertheless she said “Oh, yes …” and gave a courteous smile.
She refrained from spelling out f-a-l-s-e, but meanwhile
that older woman held the hand of an older man
(both shared wrinkles in the corner of their eyes).
“Something about you, dear, seems out of place …”
Suddenly feeling under scrutiny, she strayed from the ballroom floor –
escaping to an outside balcony while they danced, and dined,
leaving the etiquette behind.
They were all focused on romance, especially their own.
But hadn’t anyone seen she had descended those stairs alone?



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on Apr. 23 2021 at 10:53 am
ellareadsbooks BRONZE, Cambridge, Ontario
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Favorite Quote:
"The purpose of a storyteller is not to tell you how to think, but to give you questions to think upon." - Brandon Sanderson

this is so good! it felt very melancholy to me

on Nov. 28 2012 at 7:18 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

AWWWWW!!!!  :'(

on Jan. 30 2010 at 12:04 pm
earthy_kat GOLD, Sebree, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"My heart has joined the Thousand, for my friend stopped running today." - Hazel from the book Watership Down (by Richard Adams).

It's a very fine piece of work. Keep it up.

on May. 1 2009 at 2:38 am
that was really good. Very nice undertone. Loved it.

Aimee Harden said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 1:53 am
That was beautiful

Good word choice

I loved it

on Apr. 29 2009 at 11:03 pm
SagaLiSela PLATINUM, Boonsboro, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you."

Simple as that.

Or not that simple.

You deserve some serious snaps for this. Great word choice!

on Apr. 29 2009 at 2:36 pm
This Is Absolutely Lovely.

Great Use Of Words.

Keep Posting

on Apr. 13 2009 at 9:32 pm
Very creative. Good Job!!!!

on Apr. 13 2009 at 6:39 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This was wonderful, I liked the flow and rhyme, the idea.

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2009 at 3:03 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I'm not really sure I get the ending, though... they were focused on themselves, and she was alone. At first she was recognized ("rose their... glasses in recognition") and then they forgot? And how can she dance and dine then, if she doesn't have a partner?

But i do like the flow, though. it's different.

tweedle dee said...
on Apr. 13 2009 at 2:00 pm
wow it was great. it was... sad in a way. i know the feeling. great choice of words, great flow.

Mary said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 9:47 pm
I really like this! It's very...I don't know, I can definitely see it all happening.