The Wedding MAG

By Kirah Robertson, El Cajon, CA

The Procession began – I walked
down first – the Shoes clacking
with each Step – I stopped on
the Marker – the fellow Maids
followed – along with the Bride –
Do You take – the Strap pinched –
my Heel ached – that unnecessary
little Toe throbbed – I do –
how long is this Speech – I do –
The Train chugged outside – Pictures
on the beach – I knew a Blister
was coming – the happy Couple smiled –
then it was the Group’s turn – Me –
Hike back to the hall – the Pair
now One – to dance and celebrate –
the Buckle undone on the left –
now the right – wanna Dance?



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on May. 12 2009 at 2:13 pm
Malarie Dean BRONZE, Smithville, Mississippi
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I love this one!!! It is so funny, cuz that is exactly how I imagine every bride feels!!!!

on May. 1 2009 at 2:40 am
very nice. u should lenghten it.

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on Apr. 29 2009 at 12:05 am
mmfdg623 GOLD, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Far away in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.
Louisa May Alcott

Hey. Your poem was really good maybe you could check mine out- A Life Cycle.

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on Apr. 28 2009 at 8:17 pm
this is kind of good if you know wat i mean i mean its good in a weird kind of way but also in a sad kind of way. bye bye tina rox

Catlady SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 6:51 pm
Catlady SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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That is so good. amazing I never been in a wedding. you made it short and sweet.

on Apr. 13 2009 at 9:04 pm
Cassie PLATINUM, Delisle, Other
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I really enjoyed this one. Good job!

on Apr. 12 2009 at 10:14 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Thats really good.

Its has a nice flexible style,

and I love the tension it has at the same time.

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on Jan. 18 2009 at 11:59 pm
SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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