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and I cannot tell you
free from invis(imagine)ible vision
bondage anchored views
let it go (un)ravel twist
congest accelerate main artery jammed
pressure point dis(tribute) disturb weight
transfer answer inner calm
submerge emerge hot water balance thrown
sunken reference point out truth
sources matter cite me parenthetical pathetic
how can you believe in(sanity)
attempt understanding at access unknown
label construe explain with their language
the visual (internal) hidden fogged mirror
ripple reflects film distort skew still
breathing banned beneath bubbles only escape
under muscles tense under layer unfound
heat unheard affects steam projects ideas unheard
now my head is clear (mine)d is cluttered again

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Brie555 said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 4:57 pm:
I totally love this poem!! I love how you put really different words into the poem - its a different way of doing things. I LOVE IT! :D Also I like how u putthe i cannnot explain part at the beginging ;D it helps tie it together <3 totally love it!! You should totally keep wrighting!
 
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talking-with-silence said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 8:43 pm:
I like this actually :) Good job :D Love the use of parentheses (spell?)
 
SheyMynn16 replied...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 4:46 pm :
Wow, that was really interesting... in a very good thought provoking way. I love how you aranged seemingly unrelated words into a fantastic poem... the words, or parts of words in parenthesis are such an amazing and interesting part of it too!! awesome :D
 
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Avery_Rayne said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 4:40 pm:
The title suits the twisting labyrinth-like thought structure you present. The words were of a diverse category, which is surprising. So, overall, I think I might actually like this.
 
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Victoria26 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 2:41 am:
creative...
 
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:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 7:58 pm:
Very thought provoking and confusing. It was an interesting twist on description and poetry.
 
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Underestimated said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 4:35 pm:
I thought this was mmazin, i love the style too, it was kind of comfusing at the beginning but overall i loved it
 
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jeezkay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 7:52 pm:
I like your style.
 
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annkaykay2011This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 3, 2009 at 8:35 pm:
I love the style and the big words that confuse me but its fun and sharp
 
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alayapoetgirl said...
Apr. 3, 2009 at 7:36 pm:
It was kind of confusing and hard to understand... But it was good description.
 
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