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Climbing with my Christ

Forever I’ll reach out my hand and pull you up to me

Let us climb the rest side by side

Knowing we will never reach the top,
The journey be our goal
Climb towards being your own savior

Promise me something?

If you ever become higher than I,

Will you lift me up if I shall struggle?

I promise the same unto you

Let us climb to our heaven that be ourselves

I look into you and see Christ,

Look back at me, will you?

In my eyes you will see the same.





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Nikiblue said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 5:17 pm
This is beautiful. I love how you put in your religious beliefs in this piece. Kudos to you. Keep up the great work! (:
 
Sunshyne:) replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 9:37 pm
I guess it might have been decieving that this is an anti-religious feeling I have. "Climbing towards being your own savior" meaning the narator and their person their audience control there own life. I say 'heaven that be ourselves' insinuating that the narrator and their audience as humans make our own 'heaven' or happiness. And "I look into you and see Christ " saying that I see this ' Christ ' being people have created that is all powerful i... (more »)
 
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