January 21, 2010
You told me you would,
Now here we are.
This is the first time,
And now I'm not so sure.

You've shown me how
and explained with words.
But now that we're here,
I'm not so sure.

You position my hands,
making me shiver at your touch.
Then you move away,
waiting for the release.

I focus on your words
and position my feet.
You smile at me
As it soars into your hands.

I watch as you shift
to the stance you taught me.
You draw back and release
Making me nervous.

I'm taking no note
of what your doing.
Racing to get here
before it does.

It's been forgotten
because it's been beaten.
You reached me first
with a kiss.

We've somehow fallen,
with you on top.
I'm pinned to the ground,
inches from you face.

Our legs are tangled,
but neither of us care.
Your hands have my arms,
As you lean down.

You've rolled over now,
not breaking connection.
We're to tangled up
to care what happens.

You told me you would,
Now here we are.
This is the first time,
And now I'm lost with you.

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K-SaL said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 10:31 am
This one is different and very unique!! I love it :)
***Rain*** replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 3:37 pm
Thanks! :) Can you read Two Worlds? I would love your opinion on that one. :)
M.A.C. said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 10:42 am
This is a poem that sounds like one of mine (in a good way). It's good--I can imagine the scene.
***Rain*** replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:41 pm
Thanks so much for the comment! :)
Roserietta said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 9:05 pm
Odd, but very good, very good indeed.
***Rain*** replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 10:03 pm
odd is my middle name. Can you read one of my pieces called "Two Worlds"? I would love your opinion on it. :)
pearl♥ said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 9:01 pm
i like how you use the word "tangled" its wierd in a CUTE way..i love it!
***Rain*** replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 9:21 pm
Thank you! :)
**talia** This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 6:13 pm
I like this one but it's still wierd! Good job!
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