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You chose to lie

I’ve told you once, I’ve told you twice:

We are done so say your goodbyes.

I told you I would always love you,

To bad I was wrong.


It's over now,

And now we’re done.

You lied just once

But that’s enough

To end it for good.


Please don’t cry

Oh please don’t cry

You had it coming

When you chose to lie


Don’t make this harder than it has to be

Just think back on our history

And tell me if it’s really worth the hassle.





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Howler said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 2:52 am
I so get tis absolutely great!!! check out my forums!
 
Authorgal98 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 7:31 pm
I think this was great, though not your best. You have improved 110% from then, and this piece was still very good. It had a lot of emotion.
 
beccasara12 said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 3:19 pm
I really enjoyed this! great job concidering ure age!!!!
 
writes2express said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:26 pm
yea i kno its not that good...i wrote it wen i was 13 haha
 
SmileinyourSleep replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 5:27 pm
that was actually pretty good for what age you were :)
 
SmileinyourSleep replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 6:56 pm
I couln't find your home sweet home :_( lol anyways i love your work, we must chat sometime, if you would be ok with that.
 
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