save me

January 21, 2010
By invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable


no matter how i move
no matter what i do
there's people always calling my name
i try to get away from the pain
i think i'm going insane
can you save me?
can you set free?

i don't understand
the thoughts running through my brain
can you make them go away?
you're the only one i know who can get close enough to me


The author's comments:
i actually wrote it straight out of my head. i was just thinking about all the craziness in my life.

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on May. 3 2010 at 8:03 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

oooo i really like this. itz kinda dark, which is really kewwl. very goodd!! keep writingg

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:28 pm

this poem is exactly how I feel sometimes. The only thing I find can solve it is a bath ;)

the structure is really good, and backs up the theme of over-analysing and craziness you're feeling.



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