save me

January 21, 2010
no matter how i move
no matter what i do
there's people always calling my name
i try to get away from the pain
i think i'm going insane
can you save me?
can you set free?

i don't understand
the thoughts running through my brain
can you make them go away?
you're the only one i know who can get close enough to me

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xBaByGiRrL22x said...
May 3, 2010 at 8:03 pm
oooo i really like this. itz kinda dark, which is really kewwl. very goodd!! keep writingg
Emily Wolfenden said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:28 pm

this poem is exactly how I feel sometimes. The only thing I find can solve it is a bath ;)

the structure is really good, and backs up the theme of over-analysing and craziness you're feeling.

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