Whispering Kisses

January 22, 2010
By sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous


Your whispering kisses
Taint my skin
Like war paint in spit.
Battle for battle
Neither of us can
Ever gain the upper hand.

But I can’t stop
This incredible tug in my chest
From pulling me back
Into your rough arms.
Everything in me
Completely gives up will.

Your fingers dig in
To my heated skin.
But the pain escapes me
Lost in your enveloping hold.
Breaths escape our lips
Like cries for salvation from ourselves.

I put up an impassive face,
But you and I know
That it’s all a farce.
You and I have each other
Like putty in our
Blood-covered hands.

Connected by our
Savage and menacing addictions,
We are alike
For all the reasons we shouldn’t be.
But it mixes us together
In a blend of undeniable longing.

If I were to be honest,
Which is something I rarely am,
I would admit to you that
Through all my callousness
You are the single one
That softens it up.

And I love you for it.



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on Oct. 8 2010 at 11:47 pm
drowning-in-sorrow GOLD, Randallstown, Maryland
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Don't make someone a priority if they only make you an option.

this poem is absolutely amazing.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 1:38 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

thank you so much for commenting on my article! I LOVE THIS!!! you're work is so beautiful. i really appreciate the way you write! JLU!

ps: u counted right


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on Jul. 1 2010 at 10:12 am
hepburn, Assd, Other
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oh. my. gosh. i dont know if this is possible, but i think i just fell into your poem. that is crazy!!! i love this poem :D i dont think i can think of any critique >.> (im not worthy! im not worthy!)

good job :)


on Jul. 1 2010 at 12:51 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Wow I was hoping to be able to critique you...darn I can't haha.

"Through all my callousness

You are the single one

That softens it up.

And I love you for it."

This gave me goose bumps. That was really good definately 5 stars! 6 if that were possible.


on Apr. 29 2010 at 6:40 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

wow that was like...idk the word, but i like it!! that was awesome

on Apr. 22 2010 at 10:05 am
emilyjoe DIAMOND, Algonquin, Illinois
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"What if the person in the puddle is real, and you're just a reflection?" -Calvin & Hobbes

this is so good! i just love all of your work! it truly inspires me.

on Mar. 23 2010 at 7:10 pm
futurejournalist SILVER, Richland, Georgia
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i have to say i love it its amazing

on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:35 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is amazing!! keep writing!! =)


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