Every Tear I Cry

If i cry a river
I'm sure it wouldn't last
it would simply be polluted
very very fast

If i cry another
you'd use it up once more
it would simply disappear
from day one to day four

I could cry all day and night
but it wouldn't matter much
for every tear could never be
what you would call enough





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 8:54 pm
...-yeah...dont know why they're asking me for my password when i'm logged in- i love this, its short and simple and awesome. you sound pessimistic and aware and its like the rhyming scheme woke you up out your sleep and said "use me".
 
Supernova7 replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 10:41 pm
Thanx everyone I really appreciate your comments:)
 
kmarie14 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 9:49 pm

Dear you...

love it(:

enough said..:)

sincery....me:)

 
SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:47 pm
ive felt like this too before! never stop writing, your poems r amazing!
 
momo12 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 8:23 pm

i really like this one it really explains how i feel alot of the time 

you are a really good writer

 
shineybaby_1994 replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 8:07 pm
wow this is really good looooooooove it!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:34 pm
Thanx alot:)
 
i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 7:07 pm
aw, you made a greaatt poem tho. this was be-auu-ti-ful
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 8:07 pm
Thank you:)
 
Authorgal98 said...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 1:19 pm
Aww! I love it! What happened? Or did you juat put yourself in this situation, like pretend?
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 9:40 am
I just realized that no matter how much I cry over someone it wouldnt make a difference
 
JacobC said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:52 am
Another great poem.
 
Supernova7 replied...
May 23, 2010 at 12:12 pm
THANK YOU           
 
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