Web of lies

January 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


close your eyes and listen
let darkness rule its night
make the world stop spinning
hide me from the light

secrets are like spiders
lies make their webs of white
don't get caught when passing
hide swiftly in your fright

so many foolishly wander
and are bitten on the hand
poison conquers once more
above a silken strand


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on Nov. 10 2011 at 2:41 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

lol thanx:)

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:44 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

oooo wow creepy and .. intricate?... (idk first word that comes to mind) imagery :)

on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:06 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thanx:)                                                

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:02 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

This was a really good personification to the subject and I think you did an amazingly good job. :)

on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:23 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thankyou:)        

on Aug. 23 2010 at 10:43 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love this captain. it seems so mystical and creepy like you're in somebody's kitchen stalking them and you're evil and you have this profound outlook on secrets and lies and how you're going to die. very nice captain. do your dance.

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:35 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)   

on Jul. 31 2010 at 12:31 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 431 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

Very creative, this is my favorite part:

Secrets are like spiders

Lies make their webs of white

Good job! :)


on Jul. 21 2010 at 1:16 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you very much:)

Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 10:26 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing ever promised tomorrow today"

 This is really fantastic. I can't be more specific, because overall it's great.

on Jul. 16 2010 at 7:30 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"not all those who wander are lost"

very beautiful poetry...

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 11:48 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

No problem :)

on Jun. 22 2010 at 8:45 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 4:34 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

Very Nice. . . . I really liked it :)

on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:28 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Very clever and well put together.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:20 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you sooooo much:)

Trolllollo said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 9:51 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 14 comments
i loved it it was beautiful


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