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Web of lies

close your eyes and listen
let darkness rule its night
make the world stop spinning
hide me from the light

secrets are like spiders
lies make their webs of white
don't get caught when passing
hide swiftly in your fright

so many foolishly wander
and are bitten on the hand
poison conquers once more
above a silken strand




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SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:44 pm:
oooo wow creepy and .. intricate?... (idk first word that comes to mind) imagery :)
 
Supernova7 replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 2:41 pm :
lol thanx:)
 
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Supernova7 said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 9:23 pm:
Thankyou:)        
 
-Kal- replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 10:02 pm :
This was a really good personification to the subject and I think you did an amazingly good job. :)
 
Supernova7 replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 10:06 pm :
thanx:)                                                
 
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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 10:43 pm:
I love this captain. it seems so mystical and creepy like you're in somebody's kitchen stalking them and you're evil and you have this profound outlook on secrets and lies and how you're going to die. very nice captain. do your dance.
 
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A.Dreamer said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 12:31 pm:

Very creative, this is my favorite part:

Secrets are like spiders

Lies make their webs of white

Good job! :)

 
Supernova7 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:35 pm :
Thank you:)   
 
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Swiwi17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 10:26 pm:
 This is really fantastic. I can't be more specific, because overall it's great.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 1:16 am :
Thank you very much:)
 
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kenna2013 said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 4:34 pm:
Very Nice. . . . I really liked it :)
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:45 pm :
thank you:)
 
kenna2013 replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 11:48 pm :
No problem :)
 
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PoeticJustice96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:51 am:
i loved it it was beautiful
 
Supernova7 replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 11:20 pm :
Thank you sooooo much:)
 
MadAsAHatter... replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:28 pm :
Very clever and well put together.
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 7:30 am :
very beautiful poetry...
 
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