Unshed Tears

My eyes blur with tears I refuse to let fall,
My chest shakes with sobs I cannot release.

This strange wetness in my eyes is foreign to me,
This strange, almost overwhelming sadness is uncommon.

My heart is filled with what only can be described as remorse,
My entire body is nothing but a vessel for the pain.





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EmC725 said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 8:07 pm
wow! nice job! I agree about the rhyming, but never the less, I really enjoyed this poem! Very heartfelt and descriptive! Easy to relate to! : )
 
Pensivegurl replied...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:28 pm
thanks! >.<
 
Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 4:52 pm
i swear while reading this, my face contorted into an expression of sadness. i liked the part about being a vessel for the pain. this has good emotion, but i forgot how to do rhyme scheme and i really don't know how to help you make it better, but may be to make it more rhythmitic? good job ;)
 
Pensivegurl replied...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 5:03 pm
thanks for the advice, fayrouz!
 
WhiteTigress replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 10:35 pm
Pensivegurl...this is beautiful...I love it...I made a favorite on my page
 
Pensive?Gurl replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 5:19 pm
Merci, WhiteTigress =]
 
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