If I Am

January 20, 2010
By Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius


If I am the sun of your day,
you are the moon of my night.

If I am the pillow beneath your head,
you are the blanket that covers me.

If I am the air you breathe,
you are the blood in my veins.

If I am the home you come to,
you are the town I grew up in.

If I am the fire that burns,
you are the water that soothes.

If I am the lightning that strikes,
you are the thunder that roars.

If I am the love of your existance,
you are mine.


The author's comments:
This poem talks about how opposites kind-of attract. You can't have one without the other.

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:11 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

lol thanks... *blushes* I wrote it for an old crush...

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:08 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

Thank you! This was one of the first poems I ever wrote... I think I've gotten a little better... lol.

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:08 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

will do. Thanks.

on May. 27 2010 at 1:29 pm
EllenaPfeffer SILVER, North Oaks, Minnesota
5 articles 258 photos 234 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dreams you Follow

I like IT SO MUCH!! Check out my photos and storys thanx new Friend

on May. 6 2010 at 5:02 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:DDD i love it!!! thats a really cute poem. good job!!

on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:02 pm
DarkAngelEmotional SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
8 articles 5 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
1) Things won't be positive unless you are positive.
2) Admit when you do something wrong and you will recive someting great in returne.
3) Curiosity didn't kill the cat it made the cat smarter because the cat won't do it again

I love it! Its very expressive. I loved when you said "If iam the sun of your day your the moon of my night. Awsomly romantic. ^^

on Feb. 25 2010 at 11:25 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

I'm just a minor myself hun. Lol. Thanks a lot.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 4:08 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
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This is amazing!!!! I love it! It's so touching and true. You really expressed yourself. I feel like a minor compared to this! AMAZING!!!!

on Jan. 31 2010 at 11:17 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

I didn't know how to end it. I just sort of figured that it would be a difference that stood out a little.

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on Jan. 30 2010 at 4:55 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

WOAH CHICKADEE! i am speechless! i have to say that i am shocked that this was not published at all! it has a beautiful message and the striking comparisions are lovely! i do have to admit that the last two lines don't live up to the rest of the poem and i don't think they wrap it up pretty well, but i do understand it. this is very good! keep writing cause that's the only way to get better :)


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