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Hunting deer

January 20, 2010
By Joshguyette BRONZE, Glen, New York
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White, snow covered ground
Smell of gunpowder
In the dark air
Hear the branches crackling
His eyes say don’t kill me

Wait… I see it
Should take the shot
Don’t want to miss
Halfway behind the tree

Might be twelve pointed
Out here for hours
I take the shot
It falls into death

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