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No One Cares

January 20, 2010
By ...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell


No one cares



I've heard the silence,

I've felt the pain,

And I've shed the tears.


But does anyone see?

Does anyone hear?

Can anyone help?


My existence seems less and less significant,

Every breath i take does not sustain as it used to,

The words i try to speak are carried off into the wind, before it reaches their ears.


No one reaches out,

No one tries to help,

No one can see how deeply i suffer


For no one truly cares.



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on Dec. 17 2010 at 7:09 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

why thank you Healing_Angel!

on Dec. 14 2010 at 6:02 pm
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 509 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

I like this. It's well written. You have talent and it shows.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:15 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

thanks for commenting! and sorry about depressing you =)

on Jul. 26 2010 at 7:08 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Not going to lie, your poem made me depressed. :( Still great though. And perhaps its great because it makes me sad. THat you reached my heart.

Um, guess what??? Minor critique!!! One long line in the second to last stanza. Awkward. Karate chop that thing in half and you'll be on your way.


on May. 11 2010 at 5:01 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

okay! and thanks!

on Apr. 28 2010 at 6:15 pm
--LoveHappens--, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who knows you, but loves you anyway"

wow that is deep I love the writing and it is very mysterious and moving. Great job please check out my work thanks!!!

on Mar. 7 2010 at 3:38 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

thanks, jata.

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on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:29 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

I would have to say that there is at least one that cares :)

Very interesting poem

on Feb. 3 2010 at 4:54 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

Thanks! I'll have to check it out when it is. >.<

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:49 pm
SwordGirl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life."

-- Winston Chuchill

Wow! That's amazing! A lot of what I write is free verse too. (I don't think that it has been posted yet)