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Ode to Silence

January 19, 2010
By Drown_Me_In_Blue DIAMOND, Brooklyn, New York
Drown_Me_In_Blue DIAMOND, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Labels? Okay, fine. I'm bisensual. Heteroflexible. And life-curious. That about covers it. ~Morgan Torva


In the calm, only one raindrop has fallen,
And surges in spreading ripples
At the bottom of the well.
This freezing wind that rocks
The wind-tossed forest of my heart
Is only stilled by silence.

A black-and-white picture of the sky
Filled with your mute strength;
Silent snowfall,
Perfect in the darkness,
White breath clouding without sound:
In a world made of noise,
Half-drowned in pandemonium,
You are my sanctuary.

With your tranquility,
Please bring back that peaceful time,
To my wind-tossed heart
We are sinking in the sea of sound,
The silence born of noise.

Sweet serenity, the stillness of the mind
But not the cessation of thought,
Stepping on the shadow
Of crimson chaos;
In this race for higher ground,
Fighting the passage of time,
You hold the key to our peace of heart.

By your hand,
The tapestry of noise is unraveled;
This knot of garish strings,
Connecting every person
With six degrees of separation.
Unwoven, undone,
We fall apart in perfect silence,
Though the tranquil, solitary sky
Connects all the pieces of this world.

Prayers of light, carried on noiselessness—
Shatter, darkened horizon, and let the night’s calm
Fill the land once more.
Silence, like a stark reverie
Against the backdrop this frenzied world,
You hold every color of my dreams.

Humans cannot exist alone,
But our noise
Will bring pain until end.
Not speaking, we see so much more
Of light,
Of darkness.
Bear up the world on your shoulders, silence,
And return us all to our mirror-tinted innocence.

The darkness holds the silence of the world,
For light is garish, rejecting quiet,
And filled with the quicksilver emptiness
That is life.
Hold up your transparent, wraithlike hands
To shield us from the raucous sound of rain.

Pass beyond the need for sound,
Where your voice is frozen in your throat,
As though some phantom hand
Has choked it off,
And every breath trembles
With the longing for sound.

Silence is much kinder
Than the grating rush of noise
That floods our senses in this base world.
Silence, you carry in your stillness
The perfection of eternity.


The author's comments:
I like people, but I also like to be alone, without any noise or worries, and just enjoy the silence.

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on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:20 am
bootzie-bday SILVER, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Life's a dance,
You learn as you go.
Sometimes you lead,
Sometimes you follow. <3 (:

This poem is really relaxing and makes me wonder how silence can affect the world. :)

bayard SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:17 am
bayard SILVER, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Hipocrisy is the father of hatred.

this is great! you must have taken a lot of time to write this. keep on writing!

lizzy96 GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:11 am
lizzy96 GOLD, Atglen, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't about making it through the storm; it is about dancing in the rain

i like this piece but some parts are a bit confusing. overall it is a good piece i thought and i can really see your emotions through it.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:09 am
DalekJast BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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I can agree. Sometimes the world gets to noisy and you just need some silence. Great poem!

rasmak BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:07 am
rasmak BRONZE, Goosh Town, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Arise! Awake! and stop not till the goal is reached.
by Swami Vivikananda

Usually poems are just words jumbled together when written by the unexperienced. I don't know if Blood-of-Ink is experienced or not but this poem is deffinately a lot more than jumbled-up words!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:06 am
ChicaHUHH?! SILVER, Frazer, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Courage is what it takes to stand up and speak; Courage is also what it takes to sit down and listen."- Winston S. Churchill

This poem is a little confusing for me. I couldn't exactly get a moral from it, except for the serenity and peace of mind silence can make.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:05 am
kelseym26 BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"friends are like stars, you can't always see them, but you know they're always there"

This poem was very unique. It was very well written, and very creative. I believe that this could change the way some people think about silence. Keep it up!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:05 am
crswimfreak50 BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
life is good

This is a very Moving peice. everyone needs silence once in a while and this poem captured that.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:02 am
cmanning21 BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
It's only as hard as you make it.

This piece of writing is really good! It really gives off a different way of looking at things! It made my mind wonder and think to the meaning of this poem and it is really good. I enjoyed it.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:01 am
horsefreak13 GOLD, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Christ is not valued at all unless He is valued above all." -Saint Augustine

I thought that this poem was ver sophisticated and very well done!! I think you did a really nice job with describing your topic, nice job:)

fishie5 SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:01 am
fishie5 SILVER, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since. "
-Salvador Dali

I'm glad someone out there shares my love for simplicty described in big words. Keep it up! This piece was very moving and I think a lot of people will be able to realte to it.

McFerry24 GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:00 am
McFerry24 GOLD, West Chester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“You can't just beat a team, you have to leave a lasting impression in their minds so they never want to see you again” --Mia Hamm
<3

Wow! I loved your choice of words!! Great writing! Keep it up!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:59 am
Silverwolf14 SILVER, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
'Those who are dead, are not dead, they're just living in my head.'

The complexity of the poem but the simplicity of the topic really combine for an amazing piece of writing.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:59 am
stopper19 SILVER, Gap, Pennsylvania
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This was a very interesting article and I enjoyed it a lot. Your message came through about silence very clearly. It is very funny because a lot of people don't even take the time to think about silence,including me. It is very peaceful and good for us to just stop every now and then and give an ode to silence.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:58 am
AngryGopher BRONZE, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I'm a rageaholic! I can't get enough of my rageahol!

I like my quiet time.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:57 am
JohnSheridan4 SILVER, Atglen, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
buckle up,

This is a very realistic and moving piece. it shows the love for each other as humans but the need for silence.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:56 am
Oh_My_Buda SILVER, Parksburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing certain is uncertainty.

Everyone needs there alone time and the silence just helps our mind relax. The setup is awesome and the content is great.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:56 am
Sarabi_The_Great BRONZE, Atglen, Pennsylvania
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Amazingly well written! I really like the style!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:54 am
Happy2lV3Hate GOLD, Gfa, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
Im gone...dust in the wind. I smile down at these people.

Stop pretending, your just like me. You'll die one day or another.

Your poem is the best I have ever seen. You have a good look on life, and I agree in the same. You are pure brilliance.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:54 am
Christalina_Stuart SILVER, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
snap to!

I loved how this Ode was put together. It was a wonderful piece of poetry. I loved how it felt dark but peaceful at the same moment. Keep working hard!