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This painful love

I try to show you my love,
but you will not open your eyes.
I try to give you my love,
but you will not open your arms.
i try to sing you my song,
but you will not listen.
I try to feed you my food,,
but you do not eat.
I've tryed my best,
to get you to see
that all i want from you,
is to love me.




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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 5:17 pm:
Great job i love this-wonderful and creative
 
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SophiaOffing said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 9:36 pm:
WOW! This is very powerful!!!
 
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