Falling

January 18, 2010
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Stumbling
Tumbling
Blackness surrounds you

Pivoting
Down
Cool air rushing past you

Nipping
Stinging
Your face

Stomach
Lurching
Turning too quickly

Heart
Racing
Attempting to escape your chest

Grasping
Clinging
To nothing but the black void

Gasping
Heaving
Lungs shivering, crying

Breath
Stolen
Feeling you mercilessly

Screaming
Silence
Shrieking quiet overwhelms you

But



No one








Hears you














Falling





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Daphne said...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 7:46 pm
I rock bianca! u are a fantastic author
 
Bianca M. replied...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 8:24 am
Thanks, Daph! I love you!!!!
 
Olivia said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 11:37 am
Hey Bianca amazing poem u got talent girl! Keep writing!
love ya
Oliv
 
Bianca M. replied...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 6:26 pm
Thanks babe. I love you too!
 
jesse said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:45 pm
i gave it 5 stars :D
 
Bianca M. replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:57 pm
Thanks you!
 
Alyssa.D.V said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:12 pm
Hey Bianca! Love your poem my little Chirpian! :]
 
Bianca M. replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:15 pm
Thanks Alyssa....I love you my little Chirpian!!!!!
 
Safari Girl said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:06 pm
Mesmerizing....
 
Bianca M. replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:08 pm
Thank you!
 
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