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Heartless

January 18, 2010
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


So many thoughts.
Confused
Hurt.
Pain.
My heart bleeds at the thought of you.
Pools of blood
And my last nerve breaking.
Heat boiling in my blood.
My fists clenching,
Unclenching.
One slap across the face wouldn’t hurt.
After all,
You broke my heart.


The author's comments:
eh.

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Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2012 at 5:09 pm
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

I love it<3333

on Aug. 1 2010 at 6:10 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

thanks much! :)

on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:28 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I love this, it shows emotion, and reveals truth. 5 Stars :-)

on May. 12 2010 at 3:53 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

thanks for the feedback!! :)

on May. 12 2010 at 3:52 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

awh. :) well thank you!!

on May. 11 2010 at 8:30 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

I like this piece. Its not just 'eh'!!!!!

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 6:32 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Oh, okay now i get it :) Very good and i like it even more :) <3

on May. 11 2010 at 5:22 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

heart bleeds=pools of blood. thats alot of bleeding-I like it too.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 5:15 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Liked it, but didn't understand what "pools of blood" had to do with someone breaking your heart :S


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