You Broke Me

January 4, 2010
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You took away my dignity;
paralyzed the fire in me
Left me so numb,
the anger's nowhere to be found
If at once I was as
courageous as a lion,
then now I am as
timid as a mouse,
but somehow I'd rather be
with someone and miserable,
than lonely and without
My reason's clouded by the good days we have,
although they are, far and few; forced and fake
There's no hour that goes by that
I don't think of her;
What she has and
what I don't
My friends convince me that it's
not my fault,
they say,
I'm falling apart, and it's all because of you
You broke us, but what's worse is that
you broke me.





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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 9:42 pm
wow that is really good 5/5. can you check out some of my stuff?
 
PrincessPineapple said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 6:18 am
This is really good. I love the title!
 
ballergurl1313 said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 12:12 am
i loved it i felt i could relate someone broke me not to long ago. this poem really spoke to me and helped me understand how i have been feeling inside. thank you for sharing this
 
MissFaber said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 11:13 am
that was really really good! it's so realistic. it's a bit like my piece, "The inspiration has left me."
great job :)
 
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