You Broke Me

January 4, 2010
By j-rye SILVER, Toronto, Other
j-rye SILVER, Toronto, Other
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace - Jimi Hendrix


You took away my dignity;
paralyzed the fire in me
Left me so numb,
the anger's nowhere to be found
If at once I was as
courageous as a lion,
then now I am as
timid as a mouse,
but somehow I'd rather be
with someone and miserable,
than lonely and without
My reason's clouded by the good days we have,
although they are, far and few; forced and fake
There's no hour that goes by that
I don't think of her;
What she has and
what I don't
My friends convince me that it's
not my fault,
they say,
I'm falling apart, and it's all because of you
You broke us, but what's worse is that
you broke me.



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_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 9:42 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

wow that is really good 5/5. can you check out some of my stuff?

on Apr. 27 2010 at 6:18 am
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten." ~unknown

This is really good. I love the title!

smallfry GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 12:12 am
smallfry GOLD, Eagan, Minnesota
12 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game

i loved it i felt i could relate someone broke me not to long ago. this poem really spoke to me and helped me understand how i have been feeling inside. thank you for sharing this

on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:13 am
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 156 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

that was really really good! it's so realistic. it's a bit like my piece, "The inspiration has left me."

great job :)


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