With Love

January 14, 2010
You just couldn’t
stand to see one of
us happy now
Could you?

You had to take
it all for yourself,
Get there before
anyone else had
the chance. Now
Isn’t that right?

There’s no need to deny,
Because we can see the lies
It’s written all over the walls,
Don’t even try to hide
We already know the truth,
Yeah, we know it all.
Surprise, surprise.
You thought you could run
From it all, now didn’t you?

Tell me, be honest
Are you happy now?
Did you get your satisfaction?

Because it doesn’t seem so
Someday, I will promise you
this with all of my very presence
You’re going to look back
And you will see one thing
one thing will stand out from the rest.

I guarantee,
you will be
with regret.

For what
could’ve been,
and what should’ve been.

I’d like to
Thank you,
For ruining

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SilverDawn said...
May 1, 2010 at 11:26 am


i abosolutely LOVE this poem. i think it would make a beautiful song. the voice is easy to like and the third stanza was when i started to really really REALLY love this poem. i'm so glad i got to read this today. great poems really get my mood up ! i love it!

sasssgirrrl22 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 7:28 pm
wow. so meaningful. i luv it & can completely relate. i hav 2 poemz awaiting approval & i would really appreciate it if u could read em sometime. "My Fighter," and "Goodbye.''
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