Tangled

January 17, 2010
By thewritersdesk BRONZE, H-Town, Maryland
thewritersdesk BRONZE, H-Town, Maryland
4 articles 11 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your goals, minus your doubts, equals your reality."


The short, clear, nylon bristles only make it
more of a problem
My brown tresses only get stuck in them
I try to pull away, but this only
causes the strands to hurt
reminding me of the emotional pain
I've been through
I'll never be able to manage it
All the hairspray in the world
will only last for so long
Never will I be able to tame my emotions, let alone my hair
I pull on the pink plastic handle
It finally releases, letting go of the crazy curls
Untangled for now
but for me
love has always been a mess


The author's comments:
My creative writing teacher told us we had to choose an object and write about it, I chose a hairbrush.

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on Feb. 2 2010 at 5:43 pm
thewritersdesk BRONZE, H-Town, Maryland
4 articles 11 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your goals, minus your doubts, equals your reality."

thank you:)

on Jan. 26 2010 at 2:59 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx




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