What is Reality?

January 16, 2010
What is reality?
Some non-existant world in which everyone thinks the same?
What is reality?
A world where broken hearts and lost souls wander?

Where is reality?
In the facts and legends of Man?
Where is reality?
In the lost and broken dreams of the homeless and poor?

Why is there reality?
To crush my hopes and prayers?
Why is there reality?
To keep us all from achieving greatness?

Why must we go to this place
where everyone is dying?
Why must we go to this place
where the suffering never ends?

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 7:05 pm
NIce. I like the straightforwardness of this one.AND surprise, I have no comment, so this is good. really good. Well done. Marvelous. I don't know... I'm really confused on what to say because I'm so used to wrting long critiques. You left me speechless I guess.
Jynxx replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 8:16 pm
yay speechlessness! thanks for commenting ^^
--LoveHappens-- said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 6:17 pm
 love how your writing is so deep and gets to the point. It is the truth not the fluff. Great job and I agree with you. Please rate and comment on my work too thanks
Jynxx replied...
May 12, 2010 at 6:36 pm
thanks! and i will!
QuestionAuthority said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 6:15 pm
Wow. This was really profound. Keep up the good work :)
Pensivegurl replied...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 7:30 pm
thanks! >.<
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